#0026 | Dawn, Dawn, burning bright

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Submitted by Dawn in Portland, Oregon.

We don’t ordinarily accept pre-written haiku for inclusion on this site, but with Dawn’s submission we decided to make an exception because a haiku was actually integral to her story.

Here’s Dawn’s story:

“Um, I actually have a haiku that someone wrote for me ten years ago, not even realizing it was a haiku.

I was finishing my thesis and he left it on my desk.  I was hoping you might publish it with an image you make up?

It goes:

Dawn, Dawn burning bright
That’ll teach you to play with
nitroglycerine.”

3 folks have left comments on this post



» Heidi Chiao said: { Sep 3, 2007 - 02:09:54 }

Compelling stuff. Nice one everyone!

» K8 said: { Sep 23, 2007 - 07:09:42 }

I laughed, but I’m disappointed by the story.

» b said: { Jan 28, 2008 - 09:01:43 }

i thought the haiku was rubbish a 7 year old could have written better